VIdeo INCluded PLEase tell ME how IT sounds!?

I know i have posted this a couple of times but i re did the video because I had promblems with staying on key because i was trying to play the keyboard while holding the mic and singing into it. Plus I really need some advice on what i need to do better.
Im 15 and i wrote this song so tell me what u think

That is really good...You did a great job tying the keyboard and your vocals into harmony during the song. You sounded a bit too close to the microphone though which made some of the words and your voice sound muffled. Also, sometimes your voice went out of key during the song with some of ah, oze, oh you did. But other than those minor details..great job!

Good Luck..RoCk On!!